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Please take some time to check out the random webcomic of the current page load! PLEASE BE AWARE OF HEAVY CONSTRUCTION!
On Writing:
The first few pages almost turned me away in that the story seems remarkably unoriginal. A premise about saving the world, with such familiar words as "darkness" "chosen warriors" and "crystals". I wanted to see how the story might improve however, so I progressed to the most recent page. The only thing thus far in this comic that I havent seen before is a healer/white mage who isn't female. Admittedly, you have to dig it.
On Art:
The art has some high points - predominantly an original hair style on the elf character and some very attractive eyes. Otherwise the art is, more than not, lacking.
On Website:
functional
Overall:
May improve but overall I am discouraged by the lack of any original or unique content.
Initial Fantasy - http://www.actiasluna.net/if/
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User: spellbound55On Writing:
The first few pages almost turned me away in that the story seems remarkably unoriginal. A premise about saving the world, with such familiar words as "darkness" "chosen warriors" and "crystals". I wanted to see how the story might improve however, so I progressed to the most recent page. The only thing thus far in this comic that I havent seen before is a healer/white mage who isn't female. Admittedly, you have to dig it.
On Art:
The art has some high points - predominantly an original hair style on the elf character and some very attractive eyes. Otherwise the art is, more than not, lacking.
On Website:
functional
Overall:
May improve but overall I am discouraged by the lack of any original or unique content.